I just wrote this what d’ya think-i call it “Dilluted”?
By
I have concluded with myself
that this diluted place needs help
not just from me but I and I
We all give thanks for a slice of pie
that first is treated to make it fresh
so we believe this is cherry flesh
when in my heart it knows
and in the people shows
this flesh in our own
this flesh is our own and cannot be treated with
so I beg for some freedom to make my own pie
and they give me the seeds but the seeds wont make seeds
so i must beg for some more while they laugh at my pleas
they say that i’m sick when i know its a fever
but still they cut it away with a razor meat cleaver
and i know still in my mind that they stole from my pain
all the things i must learn from it, the things i would gain
I don’t feel any better mon what are ya feeding me
but the ingredients read to me like chinese calligraphy
the air it gets thicker when they cut down my garden
while my home fills with smoke and the soil it hardens
They say i don’t need these things my mind is pollution
and they tell me they know all of life and solutions
when i know i was better with the food i was growing
and that my garden would be good if the winter was snowing
and my seeds would make more seeds so i could eat with the earth
and not with the things i was told from my birth
not with the lies that they pound in my brain
its too late mon i found it, that lying devil is slain
so i see now with clearness i must make for their greed
my own plan for happiness with my own planted seed
and because they must plant their seed anew every year
my seed will make seeds and i’ve got nothing to fear
poisons only hinder but they can’t cloud my truth
this is my pesticide for the government in our youth
I will only plant truth
err..grammer has nothing to do with my poem its power of words not correctness of grammer i know how to put a sentence together







3 Comments
December 22nd, 2009 at 12:14 am
i think this is a very smart poem but most people wont read all the way down because its long try to make shortened one?
December 22nd, 2009 at 12:41 am
I completely relate to what this poem says!
December 22nd, 2009 at 1:36 am
I agree with the poem. I think it’s good. It has a few grammatical problems but I’m sure you can fix those when you go back over it. Other then that good job.